"आदरणीय लक्ष्मण धामी जी सृजन के भावों को मान देने का दिल से आभार आदरणीय"
Friendship: A Bliss.. !!!
Friendship: A Bliss.. !!!
Wild Treasure... !!
An endless list of friends..
Casual.. Regular.. Special...
Formal..Technical..Dutiful..
Wild Variety.. !!
An endless list of friends..
Loving.. Caring..Connecting..
Fighters.. Arguers..Dramatics..
Wild Synchronicity.. !!
An endless list of friends..
Available.. Static..Hovering..
Absconding.. Careless..Lost..
Loveliest of all FEELINGS..
Greatest of all ACHIEVEMENTS.
Affectionate of all DESIRES..
Amazing of all IDEOLOGIES
Booming.. Blasting.. Bombarding..
The bestest of all the GIFTS..
O Lord.. ! Shower the Blessings..
Upon a SHIP.. FRIENDSHIP..AMEN..!
Composed by Dr. Usha Sawhney
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Permalink Reply by Dr. Vijai Shanker on
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A well composed poem on the endless list of friends , respected Dr. Usha . Congratulations for this composition .
Frienship has always been an attractive subject of discussion and writing . A friend gets a very special position in comparison to all other relations because all other relations are either because of blood relationship or socio-legal relations . A friend is a choicest person and becomes a relation by chance . He is not connected by any natural relationship . Some say , he is much much better than a teacher because a teacher just shows you a path , a friends walks few steps with you on that path you take steps . ( That's why he is the best teacher who walks few steps with his students , one who involves his students with him in any task he takes up .)
we meet so many people in our whole life , we get involve together with them because of some task , some work , that is also a chance we get to get a friend . That's good but not all of them become our friends . The best directive we get in this matter is summarized in these words ' be friendly with everyone but be intimate with none or with very few selective ones '. Not all of the lot become our friends but all of them do have a lesson for us , if we are willing to learn . Thus all the persons who happen to come across us have some purpose , they don't come across accidentally , hence have a respect for everyone who meets you , travels with you , or just crosses your path .
I hope I have added something in prose in your poem .
Ones again , congratulations . Keep writing .
Regards .
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Permalink Reply by Usha on
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Respected Vijai Shanker Sir, Absolutely right Sir, Friendship's relationship is the bestest of all the relations. I know that there is no such word like 'bestest' but I am so wonderfully impressed with this relationship that feels to invent this word in real. It is so overwhelming to receive such a beautiful piece of prose as a supplement to my poetry. I will definitely keep writing in future too,your words are a real encouragement for me. Thank you so much Sir.
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Permalink Reply by DR ARUN KUMAR SHASTRI on
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dr usha ji pranaam
human species are a multifocal psyche living creature , its not every bodies cup of tea to be his or her friend . its my personal opinion as i have been failed by many till date actually i have observed that there is no friend only all are selfish human being . if you are solving their issues purpose and motive they tag u as friend unless disown you as doodh kee makhi within no time m sorry for being so harsh regarding friendship but its a fact which i my self had experienced thru life
dr arun kumar shastri -
कृपया ध्यान दे...
आवश्यक सूचना:-
1-सभी सदस्यों से अनुरोध है कि कृपया मौलिक व अप्रकाशित रचना ही पोस्ट करें,पूर्व प्रकाशित रचनाओं का अनुमोदन नही किया जायेगा, रचना के अंत में "मौलिक व अप्रकाशित" लिखना अनिवार्य है । अधिक जानकारी हेतु नियम देखे
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3-यदि आप अपने ओ बी ओ पर विडियो, फोटो या चैट सुविधा का लाभ नहीं ले पा रहे हो तो आप अपने सिस्टम पर फ्लैश प्लयेर यहाँ क्लिक कर डाउनलोड करे और फिर रन करा दे |
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