OF TRAILING PAIN

[vijay nikore]

           OF  TRAILING  PAIN

       Not long after we met

     I had an ominous feeling

     that it was not going to last

     that  we

                  had to part ...

    

      The child in me suspicious

      and yet hoping against hope

      as if

      there will be a day

      a miracle will show

      and you will hurt me no  more...

      waiting, waiting, ...waiting! 

    

      Yes, not long after we met

       I knew

      we had to go our separate ways,

      but

      did you have to be so cruel? ...

 

      Especially knowing

      that there is a child in me?

 

                                                .... Vijay Nikore

                                                      Feb 27, 2013

                                                                            while on ship

 

         (original and unpublished)

 

 

[vijay nikore]

Thank you for 'Liking' this poem dear Khan Hasnain Aaqib  ji.

Vijay Nikore

 

[Vindu Babu]

Excellent resp. sir!
Simple bt really too touching verse!
Infact everyone,whether in old age,has a CHILD inside and needs care&affection.
Sometimes childish feelings victimize us.
Congrates for presenting such pictorial thoughts.
Regards!

[Vindu Babu]

Excellent resp. sir!
Simple bt really too touching verse!
Infact everyone,whether in old age,has a CHILD inside and needs care&affection.
Sometimes childish feelings victimize us.
Congrates for presenting such pictorial thoughts.
Regards!

[vijay nikore]

Dear Vandana ji:

//Simple bt really too touching verse!//

हैं सबसे मधुर वह गीत जिन्हें

हम दर्द की सुर से गाते हैं ...(तलत महमूद का गीत)

 

Thank you so much for your appreciation of the tenderness of my lines.

 

Regards.

My best wishes for you.

Vijay Nikore

[PRADEEP KUMAR SINGH KUSHWAHA]

that there is a child in me?

yes 

i agree sir ji 

badhai saadr 

[vijay nikore]

Thank you, Pradeep ji.

Vijay Nikore

[Dr.Prachi Singh]

//Not long after we met

     I had an ominous feeling

     that it was not going to last

     that  we

                  had to part .....

have you read Metaphysics and the law of creation/ materialization?.... It says that our strongest feelings definitely manifest themselves to reality.

Nice Expression... congratulations Respected Vijay Ji.

[vijay nikore]

Respected Prachi ji:

I thank you for your thoughts on this poem.

// It says that our strongest feelings definitely manifest themselves to reality.//

... yes, I believe that this is true for  'prayers'  also. God listens to intense prayers, and if the prayer is still not answered, I believe that either my intensity fell short, or that God is saying  "it is not meant to be"  for me.

This poem refers to ominous feeling about a connection a few years ago.

What happens when there is no ominous feeling ? ... when there is not the slightest inkling of  'what is coming', and a sincere/honest relationship withdraws all of a sudden ?

I know this feeling as I have experienced it recently ... it feels like a lightening bolt, it is heart-breaking, especially if a person has been sensitive, honest, sincere, prayerful, caring, self-introspective, has seen years of life, and yet cannot find answers to what and why it happened.... but continues with internal struggle (in vacuum) to find the answers. And the answers can come only from one person.

Regards, and once again, thanks.

Vijay