"धन्यवाद आ. बृजेश जी "
I dropped into her
Yesterday night; as I do remember
I was crying as badly as I’ve never
Yeah-‘cause of you, who led off chains upon my heart
That would be dormant forever.
Dear, I’m not cursing you;
It was all me who desired to gain
To you happiness far more than infinity;
So now, grieving in vain.
Huh, for your sweet smile,
Even that one lasting for a while;
I was ready to do anything,
And to give you beloved; everything.
My whole world was just you-
And yeah, only and only you
It would be you, from whom my life starts,
And eagerly and lovingly it casts.
Whenever my eyes lay upon you,
It could see the most innocent face;
Yeah, it was its heartiest wish
To find just you to gaze.
But, every time do I found you with me-
Just I’ve to close my eyes.
There-I would make you see
And could appreciate your beauty nice.
But now, everything is over
I’m in vain, for the things I discover.
So deeply have I hurt
Still there is nothing to cure this broken heart.
I know you would come back
But, you shall not find me there.
For now, there’s nothing left to spare.
Huh, pain all I got in return of care.
Usually people like gems;
But you permitted it letting off whole treasured,
And along with it, a fine diamond;
Whose value can’t be measured.
But don’t worry my love
We’ll surely meet again, I bet;
Maybe in your dreams or thoughts-
Where you can see me but can’t get.
Composed by:-
Shivam Jha
I was crying as badly as I’ve never
Yeah-‘cause of you, who led off chains upon my heart
That would be dormant forever.
Dear, I’m not cursing you;
It was all me who desired to gain
To you happiness far more than infinity;
So now, grieving in vain.
Huh, for your sweet smile,
Even that one lasting for a while;
I was ready to do anything,
And to give you beloved; everything.
My whole world was just you-
And yeah, only and only you
It would be you, from whom my life starts,
And eagerly and lovingly it casts.
Whenever my eyes lay upon you,
It could see the most innocent face;
Yeah, it was its heartiest wish
To find just you to gaze.
But, every time do I found you with me-
Just I’ve to close my eyes.
There-I would make you see
And could appreciate your beauty nice.
But now, everything is over
I’m in vain, for the things I discover.
So deeply have I hurt
Still there is nothing to cure this broken heart.
I know you would come back
But, you shall not find me there.
For now, there’s nothing left to spare.
Huh, pain all I got in return of care.
Usually people like gems;
But you permitted it letting off whole treasured,
And along with it, a fine diamond;
Whose value can’t be measured.
But don’t worry my love
We’ll surely meet again, I bet;
Maybe in your dreams or thoughts-
Where you can see me but can’t get.
Composed by:-
Shivam Jha
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Permalink Reply by KALPANA BHATT ('रौनक़') on
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Nice poem Respected Shivam Jha ji
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सदस्य कार्यकारिणीPermalink Reply by rajesh kumari on -
Usually people like gems;
But you permitted it letting off whole treasured,
And along with it, a fine diamond;
Whose value can’t be measured.of course beloved one is always more than the treasure of gems or money.
really very nice poem felt immersed in emotions.
congratulations Shivam ji
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1-सभी सदस्यों से अनुरोध है कि कृपया मौलिक व अप्रकाशित रचना ही पोस्ट करें,पूर्व प्रकाशित रचनाओं का अनुमोदन नही किया जायेगा, रचना के अंत में "मौलिक व अप्रकाशित" लिखना अनिवार्य है । अधिक जानकारी हेतु नियम देखे
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