"नमस्ते जी, बहुत ही सुन्दर भोजपुरी ग़ज़ल की प्रस्तुति, हार्दिक बधाई l सादर"
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Maa : Take me to doctor today . I am unable to walk because of the back ache .
Son : Oh maa , every day you complain about something or the other . Please think of us too . We have our own lives too .
Maa : Oh dear ! Yes sorry son , I shall not disturb you any more .
She went away in her room silently weeping. Her son and daughter-in-law couldn't see her tears . Her grand children were looking at her. They loved their granny . Both went into their room .Their parents couldn't understand their immediate reaction . They stared at each other . After a while they brought a wooden cart though it was dirty , they brought it and running they went to their granny .
Kids : Granny , please take this , we can't see you in pain . Atleast this will be a support for you.
Granny : Oh my love , so sweet of you thanks alot , you atleast thought of me , you saw my pain .
She kissed their foreheads and blessed them .
Kids among themselves said to each other
Hey we shall take care of this cart . Try not to break it .
Sister went to their parents and asked father ," Dad do bring one more cart for us."
Astonishingly he said , " For what ?"
You two will need it na in future .
Parents were speechless
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Son : Oh maa , every day you complain about something or the other . Please think of us too . We have our own lives too .
Maa : Oh dear ! Yes sorry son , I shall not disturb you any more .
She went away in her room silently weeping. Her son and daughter-in-law couldn't see her tears . Her grand children were looking at her. They loved their granny . Both went into their room .Their parents couldn't understand their immediate reaction . They stared at each other . After a while they brought a wooden cart though it was dirty , they brought it and running they went to their granny .
Kids : Granny , please take this , we can't see you in pain . Atleast this will be a support for you.
Granny : Oh my love , so sweet of you thanks alot , you atleast thought of me , you saw my pain .
She kissed their foreheads and blessed them .
Kids among themselves said to each other
Hey we shall take care of this cart . Try not to break it .
Sister went to their parents and asked father ," Dad do bring one more cart for us."
Astonishingly he said , " For what ?"
You two will need it na in future .
Parents were speechless
Self written and unpublished
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1-सभी सदस्यों से अनुरोध है कि कृपया मौलिक व अप्रकाशित रचना ही पोस्ट करें,पूर्व प्रकाशित रचनाओं का अनुमोदन नही किया जायेगा, रचना के अंत में "मौलिक व अप्रकाशित" लिखना अनिवार्य है । अधिक जानकारी हेतु नियम देखे
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3-यदि आप अपने ओ बी ओ पर विडियो, फोटो या चैट सुविधा का लाभ नहीं ले पा रहे हो तो आप अपने सिस्टम पर फ्लैश प्लयेर यहाँ क्लिक कर डाउनलोड करे और फिर रन करा दे |
4-OBO नि:शुल्क विज्ञापन योजना (अधिक जानकारी हेतु क्लिक करे)
5-"सुझाव एवं शिकायत" दर्ज करने हेतु यहाँ क्लिक करे |
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