Hunger

[बृजेश नीरज]

I speak about hunger

Hunger of my belly

Hunger of my family

Hunger of survival!

 

You speak about hunger

Hunger of your body 

Your cadence and lust 

Hunger of power!

 

And that’s makes the difference

Between You and I

 

I - a common man

You - a supreme man

                                    - Brijesh Neeraj

 

[Vindu Babu]

In what sense 'Supreme' respected sir?
If sm1 hs that typ of hungers,i think cn never attain Supremacy.
Nice verse in good rhythm.

[बृजेश नीरज]

The so called ‘Elite’ class has that type of feeling!

[PRADEEP KUMAR SINGH KUSHWAHA]

And that’s makes the difference

Between You and I

 

I - a common man

You - a supreme man

 nice one dear brjesh ji. 

regards 

[बृजेश नीरज]

Respected Pradeepji, Very very Thanks. You always encourage my writings!

[Dr.Prachi Singh]

Very nice poetry Resp. Brijesh ji 

And that’s makes the difference

Between You and I

 

I - a common man

You - a supreme man................a supreme man// or a fake supreme man?

heartiest congratulations and Best Wishes

[बृजेश नीरज]

Respected Prachiji very very Thanks!