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ग़ज़ल का अच्छा प्रयास है बधाई स्वीकार करें।
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O My Almighty
O God!
Since my childhood
I have been listening in the stories
Of my grand mothers and my
Mother too?.
That whatever happens, whenever happens,
It only happens because of you.
It means so almighty are you.
Aren't you?
If yes then please do me a favor
Change my life into so simple
With conscience so broad
That I may pray to forgive them
Who are doing me wrong.
I seek the hollowness of a flute
Where the eco of the blower
May change into a divine music
I want to feel you in me with full fragrance
And full light.
O God!
You who promised to bear,
All the liabilities of those
Who have dissolved their existence
Within you.
But who will take care of those
Who don't know how to dissolve,
Or who are unaware with the
signification Of dissolution?
O God!
I don't want to pray for me,
Because I know
And I am fully confident?
That you won't let me down.
I am now praying for those
Who don't accept your existence.
Forgive them O God!
Not because they don't know
What they're doing .
But because I am told
That You are almighty,
And only an Almighty can
Forgive to all sinners as well as
Innocents without any partiality.
Now reply me O God !
Are You really an almighty?
Brijesh Kumar Tripathi
Since my childhood
I have been listening in the stories
Of my grand mothers and my
Mother too?.
That whatever happens, whenever happens,
It only happens because of you.
It means so almighty are you.
Aren't you?
If yes then please do me a favor
Change my life into so simple
With conscience so broad
That I may pray to forgive them
Who are doing me wrong.
I seek the hollowness of a flute
Where the eco of the blower
May change into a divine music
I want to feel you in me with full fragrance
And full light.
O God!
You who promised to bear,
All the liabilities of those
Who have dissolved their existence
Within you.
But who will take care of those
Who don't know how to dissolve,
Or who are unaware with the
signification Of dissolution?
O God!
I don't want to pray for me,
Because I know
And I am fully confident?
That you won't let me down.
I am now praying for those
Who don't accept your existence.
Forgive them O God!
Not because they don't know
What they're doing .
But because I am told
That You are almighty,
And only an Almighty can
Forgive to all sinners as well as
Innocents without any partiality.
Now reply me O God !
Are You really an almighty?
Brijesh Kumar Tripathi
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Brijesh Ji us upar wale ko cridit de kar aap ne sab ishwar se pyar karne walon ka sar ooncha kar diya hai.
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