THREE FRIENDS (By Divyansh)

[Dr.Prachi Singh]

This is the first story framed by Divyansh, when given the names of three creatures DOLPHIN, SEA HORSE AND TORTOISE.

Once upon a time there in a sea, there lived three friends named were Dolphin, Sea Horse and Tortoise.

One day Dolphin saw a ship catching fishes. She warned her friends not to go at Antarctica side.Tortoise and Sea Horse promised that they will not go anywhere far, but Sea Horse not followed the promise and go at Antarctica side. He trapped in the net. He tried to came out but he can't. The he shouted "Help me!, Help me!" Sea Horse was died. When his friends saw him they cried so much.

Unpublished and Original 

[vijay nikore]

//When his friends saw him they cried so much//

 

 very touching ...  good story ... just the right length to convey a good message ...

 

Congratulations, Divyansh.

[Shyam Narain Verma]

Very very thanks for this knowledged story.

[जितेन्द्र पस्टारिया]

बहुत प्यारी कहानी, अपनी सार्थकता व् सही सन्देश देती हुयी, उतनी ही मासूमियत से, जितने की आप हो..चि. दिव्यांश, आपको ढेर सारा स्नेह...

[Sushil.Joshi]

प्रिय दिव्यांश को ढेर सारा स्नेह एवं आशीर्वाद उनकी इस प्रथम संदेशपरक एवं दिल को छूती लघु कथा पर...... आपकी छवि स्पष्ट रूप से दिव्यांश में दिख रही है आ0 डॉ. प्राची...... वही लेखन के प्रति रुचि..... बहुत बहुत बधाई...

[डॉ गोपाल नारायन श्रीवास्तव]

Divyansh

       I don't know how old you are. but you certainly tried your best.  my blessings to you.

[Dr.Prachi Singh]

Thanks everyone for your precious motivation and blessings to Divyansh (seven and half years old).

[Saurabh Pandey]

Oh.. very good ! Means, this story reads out Divyansh's version of story-telling !  If so, and it is, then it's really wowing !

Convey my best wishes and blessings to this tiny teller, Dr Prachi ..