The Earth

[Shivam Jha]

There's a planet

Whose name is Earth

Creatures love it as it's like their mother;

Who give them birth.

Millions of livings beings live here,

Whom the beautiful planet care

All the things present here for life;

Is sufficient and fair

As the Earth never let them

To be in despair.

Millions of years ago, it was a giant ball of gas and fire

It was very young,

Then it began to be living

And with the rhythm of life, it began to sung.

There came the air,

That was developed with care

As withou it life wouldn't dare;

To expand itself and nothing would be fair.

Following air, water also came

And in the form of huge oceans and seas, it so immensly laid

That in the development of our mother Earth,

It greatly acted as an aid.

Bringing life to Earth was

It's main aim

To fulfil it,

The gifts of mother nature came.

It'd given us many things

Like air, water and the trees

So that the creatures include us

Would be able to live with the greatest ease.

It's because of Earth

Today Where we are,

As without it

We wouldn't be able to even drive a car

And in our thausands years evolutions

We wouldn't have came so far

We humans, are living just like the Earth's king,

It'a all because our mother Earth

Has given us;

Many wonderful and important things.

We should be thankful to our mother Earth

For the things; she lend

That would be wirh us,

Till we end.

There's no time to spare

We should honour the mother Earth and all it's creatures;

Also for us what she care

We should make it a good place for living

By making all the things well 'n' fair.

(original and unpublished)

[जगदानन्द झा 'मनु']

Congratulations great poetry. My blessings are with you. Go on Earth not only meet the sky is yours

[Dr.Prachi Singh]

Dear Shivam 

nice poetry... very good effort on expressing evolution of Earth and your love towards the mother Earth.

Please accept heartiest Congratulations.

I want you to learn three basic things to do wonders in writing poetry 

1. try to write as short sentences as you can (means no explanations, just the core)

2. try to learn syllables 

3. make a collection of good rhyming words.